First of all, thank you for providing a link to the poem. I read that first, then read the Wikipedia article about it. Titles are one of my favorite things about episodes and songs and stories and poems. I'm so glad you reached to such a meaningful source to give your story that much more dimension.
And what a wonderful story it is. It's absolutely lovely. The characterization of everyone is just spot on, and I adored the relationship you painted between Jack and Martha. And Ianto really surprised me. I liked the connection that he formed with Martha. Your prose is also extremely beautiful. I'm pointing out the scene where they're lying on the lift. What a brilliant image. And the way you describe how the TARDIS has affected them is equally gorgeous.
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First of all, thank you for providing a link to the poem. I read that first, then read the Wikipedia article about it. Titles are one of my favorite things about episodes and songs and stories and poems. I'm so glad you reached to such a meaningful source to give your story that much more dimension.
And what a wonderful story it is. It's absolutely lovely. The characterization of everyone is just spot on, and I adored the relationship you painted between Jack and Martha. And Ianto really surprised me. I liked the connection that he formed with Martha. Your prose is also extremely beautiful. I'm pointing out the scene where they're lying on the lift. What a brilliant image. And the way you describe how the TARDIS has affected them is equally gorgeous.
Wonderful job.